Bittersweet - Comments

Noooooooooo you need to finish this! I just read it all in one sitting

I really like this story so far. Please update soon!

I meant that you changed styles throughout the first few paragraphs a lot.

I've only just read the first chapter and I have to mention that throughout you change writing styles a lot.
You'll start off in third person and switch over to first and then switch back, it's kind of confusing.
Other than that, this is pretty well written.