its amazing!!! ♥
January 18th, 2012 at 03:13am
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I like the story and it's a very interesting idea. Though I can't say I would react quite as smoothly as she has. I'd been swinging multiple times. She trusts people a lot faster than I do. Please continue!!!!January 16th, 2012 at 08:18am
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Hellooooo :) I really like your start. It has me interested in what's going to happen next, even though I'm not quite sure as to why the main character feels like she needs to hide. The important part is I have questions that need to be answered. So, please continue.December 30th, 2011 at 06:22pm
