Because The World Will Never Take My Heart - Comments

It was awesome :))) I loved Frank's insecurity C: he's just so adorable, though I'm still angry with him for these three days of not seeing Gee :( but now they're together! :)))

awwww <3 that was kinda cute xoxo :D
update soon :)

I f'ing love this story I freakin can't wait for the next chapter XD

I wrote the other on my phone so it was pretty obvious it was shitty.. haha glad you like this better :3

Yes I like this chapter better C: it has more descriptions in it :D

I totally agree with my cat xD Anyway I'll edit it soon

I can't agree with your cat C: What's wrong with Frank? D: I wanna find out soon :)))

hya :D Gerard totally bitched that asshole :P

Ahhh great :DDD I loved how they don't want to rush things it's really cute :3 and how Gee punched that asshole :) it was really good :DDD

Aw thank you very much <33.
I'm sure Ashley won't make us wait :)

I LOVE this story. It's absolutely amazing. I love the way Gerard and Frank act in this story. You guys are doing a kick ass job. Keep up the good work!
I can't wait to to read more.
Update soon!
<3

LOL Frank really sounds like a lovesick teenager :DDD but he is :))) I liked this chapter and Frank was late to work :( and he couldn't make Gee his coffee :'( but they're gojbg on a date now :DDD

Awwww :D Frank looooovvveeeessssss Gee ^_^
I love love love this story
xoxo

Awwww Frankies all love-sick ^_^
I love this story so much, I WANNA MARRY IT! No...Im not that obsessed...yet...
Update?? (:

It was really cute and fluffy, how.they were always bothered by something when they were about to kiss :( but they kissed anyway! :))) aaand they stopped before it got too heated, which was really good, because it seems like they care for each other and not only want to fuck :D great! :)))

update update update
i think it's cute how they actually want to get to know each other and not be "a one night thing"
:D
update, like...NAOWWWW

Loved it, but can't write now, real comment later

Cute cute cute cute! Update soon!

Oh my god! I think I just died<3 this is the most amazing comment ever! Thank you so much for all these kind words n.n We're flattered really. And thanks I'll fix that asap because I'm on my phone right now xD Anyways thanks!!! Xo

Why does this not have more comments? I was expecting pages... This story is seriously the epitome of perfect to me :P I haven't been on here in a while so this is the first story I've read since I've been back and I absolutely adore it.

First of all, I love the character development in both Gerard and Frank. Gerard initially has that typical "I flirt with everyone, what of it?" attitude about him, yet when it comes to Frank he completely zones in and takes the time to try and learn about him. This is something I absolutely love about this story, because in most Frerard's where one of the characters is like this it usually just ends the same where Gerard is all smooth moves as if he actually has had a real relationship before, not to mention those stories typically get that way within one chapter. To me, this story is a lot more realistic to a person who is all one-night stands and no relationship, especially since he has absolutely no clue how to go about a real date.

I like that Gerard goes from being all clever and seductive to completely stumped and freaking out. It's like someone just wiped him of everything he's ever known and dropped him back into the world. The continuous interruptions are perfect and it's awesome how it plays on Gerard's nerves and leads to him being pretty much having to say, "LOOK, I AM GOING TO KISS YOU." You know, even though he doesn't say that, pretty sure it's what he's thinking :P

Frank's character is awesome too, and I like that they both come from similar worlds where they just pass through people's arms carelessly, yet when they see each other, everything just changes. I think it's adorable how Frank makes a point to say that he doesn't want "that" kind of thing with Gerard.

Anyway, this has been my most sucky comment ever, sorry for my inability to able to explain things well -_- But anyway, I love this, please update soon :D

Oh, I saw one small error in chapter seven, you said:

I ran a hair through my hair

And I'm assuming you meant hand [: Just thought I'd tell you. But anyway, this story is awesome, already subscribed :P