I don't trust him like my left don't trust my right, Ben is hiding something and I'm sure it's regarding Aron, there is no way he is tht perfect and not holding a secret it's like Sweeny Todd's meat pies its so fucking delicious abd baked to perfection but the secret in the meat is dead human bodies, and also she is comparing Ben to Danny as if she likes Danny as well when she supposedly hates Danny yea tht would be the day becuz when Ben's secret comes out she is goin to want Danny to come to her rescue becuz she got kidnapped courtesy of Ben, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Oh he is way too good to be true!! He has got something up his sleeve, or at least I'm convinced he does. But we will see, maybe I'm wrong. :D <3 Michele
i love that you updated. This story is great. But I just can't stand this girl. She's such a little bratt! I mean... Ben? Seriously?!?!? He is soooo bad news. & I sincerely hope nothing happens between the 2 of them. To get interrupted or something.
Poor Danny I dont trust Ben anymore than a vegan eating a burger like he seems sneaky and a heartbreaker he claims tht he loves her but I think thts a lie he doesn't love her like Danny loves her and Danny will be damned if Ben hurts her in the end, I also think tht Kari is making a mistake by sleepin with Ben knowing how he is with women in general, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Ben is bad news!!! I don't like him, I have a feeling he is going to hand her over to Aron. He just overall makes me nervous. I hope Danny can protect her, or try to at least. <3 Michele
I'm worried about Ben, he is too good to be true. He definitely has something bad up his sleeve. I just hope Danny or her father realize it before she gets put in a bad position. <3 Michele
Seriously I don't trust Ben I mean he took her to an old house tht was her grandmother's house alone with no other guard around yea kinda supicous to me, I think tht Kari needs to stop being a spoiled brat or a royal class a asshole to Danny he isn't jealous about Ben he is more worried about her than anything since she is his responsiblity in a way I mean they r arranged to be married, anyhoo love this story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
She is soo stupid and stubborn and dense as hell, she knows she isn't suppose to be havin any kind of relationship with her dad's workers cuz remember he is off limits duh, and u finally realize tht u have feelings for Danny well u kinda fucked tht up by being a selfish child who wants to be an adult well when u find out the consequences of being with Ben don't come crying to Danny ok u pushed him away too many times tht I'm sure tht he is sick of u treatin him like scum between ur feet when has done nothing but be there for u but it's watever, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
SEE?!?!? This is why I wanna samck Kari! She's just so... argh!!! I don't even have a word to describe it!!! Poor Danny! & Ben... well, Ben is Ben... he's just a hot mess!!! I seriously hope she opens her eyes now before it's too late. Cuz if she screws up everything for her & Danny... I'm gonna be really sad!!!
She is so hard headed and stubborn! I can't believe she is going to the attic with Ben, I'm really hoping she doesn't do anything with Ben. i have a feeling that she will regret it in the morning. And I'm not too sure if I like Ben just yet. <3 Michele
Kari u r soo hard headed the fact tht u r goin to the beach with ur father's henchmen, which u claimed he was off limits, alone and drinking beer when u kno tht ur ex is on the loose and he can possibly kill u on the spot since ur not watching ur surroundings, I hope tht Danny is out there watching or something cuz I don't kno Ben tht well he could be a double agent or something idk, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)