One Pack of Smokes from Broke. - Comments

  • ThingsNeverChange

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    This story is amazing :) Update soon? *subscribe*
    February 6th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Aw. Cute moments. :3
    I think he should have danced with her though. xD

    I like it. Dx
    Comments are hard to come by sometimes(most of the time I assume). I know what you mean though about the motivation. I have the same problem. But please keep updating? :3
    February 6th, 2012 at 06:44pm
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Ah, Rebecca is her name. XD
    Super glad she didn't show up, it was nice seeing Charlie and Garrett interact and stuff. Even if he nervous and tripping over his words--it was cute. :D
    February 2nd, 2012 at 02:30am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    If I ever saw Garrett in school or something.. I'd probably stare at him before ever managing to utter any words.
    So yep, I know exactly what he's going through with Charlie. xD
    And her remark about the salad totally not hearing Pat's question made me laugh. I think that'd be something I'd do.
    Oh... so the girlfriend comes into the picture soon? Damn. Dx I was hoping he'd dump her before he even said anything to Charlie. Bahaha.
    January 29th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • la dispute.

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    Poor Garrett. I think we've all felt a little creepy staring at our crushes, though, so he shouldn't feel too bad. Hahaa. I like that Pat had a plan, or made a believable one up on the spot! Go, Kirch! Lol. I can't wait to read the party scene! And maybe I overlooked it, but I definitely did not pick up on Garrett having a girlfriend. This could complicate things, I'm assuming! Lol. :)
    January 29th, 2012 at 04:58am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Her mom's in alcoholic? Dx I feel so bad for Charlie. :/ I can tell she's had it rough.
    That's actually really sweet of David to cook for her. :3
    I liked this chapter, and I'm excited to see more Garrett! :D
    January 28th, 2012 at 03:04am
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    I'm intrigued! I want to know who he is and what exactly happened to him! I like Charlie's character; she's got some depth to her! I also hope that Garrett can help her. I can't wait to see how this pans out! :)
    January 28th, 2012 at 02:43am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    I really like this story so far. :3
    I'm curious to see who this him is.
    Maybe Garrett can be the one to help her get ... over ... him or something? Yes? :D
    Update soon.
    PS: Subscribed~
    January 27th, 2012 at 06:11am