Soul Meets Body - Comments

wow
her moms a bitch
BUT I LOVE THEIR DAD HES SO SWEET
AND I LOVE HOW JOHN STOOD UP FOR HER
CANT WAIT FOR MORE <3

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY <3

OK, so like the person below me it was thanks to comment swap that I was brought here and sadly I don't know the famous people in your story! I looked them up though of course and they seem pretty damn cool- I really like the idea in the description that you put pictures there of the characters, it's kind of an easier access than having to go all the way to the characters section so good idea! OK, so I really liked the first chapter, although sadly I was pretty distracted by the grammar errors, like in the very first line where you say 'today, was one of those days'. You don't need a comma there at all! You also spelt ' definitely' wrong which is what it should have been instead of ' defiantly'...But OK, pickiness aside, I really got into the story and started to enjoy it. I love how you left the first chapter hanging though- I just had to read on! I loved the tension with her and Kennedy too. I like how you used rhetorical questions as well at the end of each chapter, it really made me ask myself those questions and even though it was a bit cliché it worked! Good job and keep up the fab work :)

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So, I'll admit it. I have no idea who the famous guys are in your story. Regardless, I enjoyed it. The drama was tasty, and you're writing's not bad. Chapters could be a bit longer, but overall, pretty good. Keep on writing! :)

this story is amazinggg :) can't wait for the next update! oh, and when you introduce Nick Santino a little more..could I maybe be his girlfriend in the story? ;) haha, my name is Kat. thank you! loving the storyyyy <3

i'm worried as to what come next.. not to sure whats to be expected
but it was another great chapter. no surprise there:)

oooh, the drama llama has been awoken !!!
this is getting juicyyy ;D
update !!!

I'm not hating it! Love this story, you're a really good writer :D update soon.

I'm not hating it at all! It really is good, don't doubt that! :) I really like Tays character and the way you write John.
Updat soon!

Aww i hope Jess and Garrett don't break up. Update soon! :)

i soooo cant wait to read more (:
i love this story

I'm sensing drama! Yes! I'm loving this story :)
Um, how about my middle name? It's Lynn, haha.
Update Soon!

Oh i feel like there shall be a bit of trouble on the way. Exciting! Update Soon :)

Lovin' the vibe missy. I can't wait for more, update soon(:

Uh oh I sense trouble. & I love the way you write. You should do a Garrett fic I absolutely love him...please? :) lol

John and Tay seem like they would be cute together :D He's already buying her food lol. Love it so far and look forward to the rest. :)

I loved it! I like the little John/Tay moment. It was cute. I can't wait for more, update soon(:

Hey, I'm loving this! I want to see where this John/Tay relationship is headed ;) I'd love to be Tim's girlfriend but, sadly, my name is Kennedy and it makes everything confusing. Sigh.

Enough with my name troubles, keep writing!

I'm really excited to see were this is going:)