Pale as Night - Comments

CountSynula (100)

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Haha yay an update, so that means....that soon, I'll get to see what goes on between them in the more present sense of the story. I really do love this story! It's so dark and I like Michael. The combination of mystery and danger to him is just what I love!

May 24th, 2013 at 04:42am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Please update soon!

May 4th, 2013 at 02:58am

Zowie Stardust (100)

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@ Chicago-Kid
Haha, Thanks. Yeah, I guess I sort of am.

April 20th, 2013 at 05:28am

Chicago-Kid (100)

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I fink u freeaky and i like you a lot

April 18th, 2013 at 09:11am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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It is getting way too good! That chapter was so hot! Update soon!

April 16th, 2013 at 10:49pm

Zowie Stardust (100)

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@ NikkiFoxy8
I'm working on. Hopefully by this weekend I'll be done with the next chapter.

April 12th, 2013 at 02:50am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Update soon!

April 12th, 2013 at 02:43am

saint james. (160)

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I love this story already and I just found it. I am glad that I did because you an amazing writer. I love reading vampire stories, but there are only a few good ones and your story is definitely one of them. I am curious to how Rebecca turned into a vampire and how she almost died. I hope that you update very soon!

March 30th, 2013 at 07:24pm

Chicago-Kid (100)

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Back again. I hope you have more readers than I. You're a fantastic writer!
<3

February 17th, 2013 at 12:08pm

Zowie Stardust (100)

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@ Chicago-Kid
Oh, thanks for telling me, I'll be sure to correct it :) And thanks for the comments, love.

January 29th, 2013 at 12:35am

Chicago-Kid (100)

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I dig, I dig. Always loved the silent protector sort of thing. I also love how you've created that scarysensual mood towards the end. Wonderful!

(by the way, you spelt choked wrong more than once - the only imperfection in this story)

January 27th, 2013 at 05:44am

Chicago-Kid (100)

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My word. This is exactly what I wanted to read! I really loved the third chapter. Thank you for writing this, please update soon

January 20th, 2013 at 12:17pm

Noturs92 (100)

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Woohoo!! You updated finally! Please please please update again soon. This story is amazing thus far. :)

January 17th, 2013 at 06:02am

Noturs92 (100)

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Ahh so good! Update soon please...I really love tour writing.

December 18th, 2012 at 07:00am

CountSynula (100)

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Omg....this is amazing. Like seriously...here lately I haven't been able to find ANYTHING at all that holds my attention but I'm loving this story. You have the best original fictions I've read on here so far. Hope you update soon.

December 1st, 2012 at 05:45pm

Noturs92 (100)

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Hey! Just finished reading what you have up and I like it. Will ya update soon? :)

March 6th, 2012 at 05:40am

hangsang. (210)

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Ahh, so short! This is amazing so far. I was sad that there was only one chapter.

The layout was pretty amazing, I enjoy it.

I didn't even see mistakes.

February 3rd, 2012 at 08:03pm