The fact that this still hasn't been update upsets me rather a lot. I was addicted to this story and now it's dead :( I hope you're alright though :) I just re-read it again in the hope that you will update again eventually and I will know every detail by then :D
Im happy Garret is with Shane now and off Mattie. Mattie and John need to last! They are perfect honestly. Whatever haopens I hope they stay together !! They need to. Update:)?!
Just read, literally, the WHOLE story today. I must say I am not a fan of incest but there's just something about this story that makes me want to continue. I really love it! :D
You could have them go into the court trial and all that and see what "evidence" the mom has on John and mattie having an incestuous relationship only for the judge to see it as incompetent, and then have it end shortly after...like an epilogue and all the sweet stuff. I don't really see what more you could do for this story besides making i drag on longer than necessary.
cute c: John&Mattie are adorable. I think that there should be more talk about the court trial...i kinda want Garrett&Mattie to pretend to be boyfriends just to show that John&Mattie aren't in a relationship together. idk. I'm sure you'll come up with something great :) <3 please update soon! <33