Don't Ever Leave Me - Comments

youll see
*DUN DUN DUN!*
oh so exciting and im glad you like <3
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I love this! :D but what's wrong with frankie!?! D:

I hope Frank is okay!

welcome and heyy lensi

Dear I Forgot My Name
You dont need to tell her that she needs to go read some others people stories to see how it is writen. you should let people do what they want to do and you can mind your own dam Business XDown

Excellent chapter! Thank you for the paragraphs, it was much easier to read.

if you dont like it then dont read it i write how i think it sounds good this is all i can say seeing as how i am 13

I'm going to sound like a bitch, but I'm only trying to help.
I would suggest you read some material on Mibba (if you haven't already) to get a feel on how people tend to write on this site. Now, everyone has their own different writing type, but we all kind of follow the same guidelines. Such as spacing after a paragraph & dialogue, and, well, to be blunt, using the nifty little spell checker at the top left corner of your screen.
Again, only trying to help.

Lensi!!!! :DDDDD

I love it its the best story i have ever read! Sometimes i wander are you a writer?

Thank you, I'll try to fix that next time which will be in about 20 minutes.

This is a very good story! And it was a long first chapter, which I liked. The only thing is that it was difficult to read because it read as one long paragraph. But don't stress about it- you're still a very talented writer.

sorry but i do have really bad spelling and the spell check helped 0% and thank you :D i am glad you liked it

I like this so far, but I got lost in a block of words every 2 seconds. lol but yeah it's good :)