Dirty Kris Letang Story - Comments

I like this story. I don't think it needs a plotline. It's just a dirty story & I like it.

from an author's perspective, this is a very poorly written story. The grammar and plotline seem to be nonexistent. There is no substance to this story. I'm sure if there were a plot and some more to the story other than sexual content, (and this is very bad sexual content might I add) I may be interested in reading it.

Fuck yeah, that was hot!

Shit, I come home from class and read this, fucking awesome! What a great after school present :D

I'm watching the game and reading this at the same time while drinking vodka and cranberry, that was so fucking hot! Damn, Rebecca is a lucky girl!

Hahaha just trying my very best. I'm glad you guys are liking it so far. many more chapters to come.

I have to repeat it, are you trying to kill us here!? Damn, that was hot, what a way to wake up ;)

Woman, you are killing me! *thud*

Phew! Need a cold shower now! Great job!

Whoa, that was so fucking hot, fucking hell! Damn girl, you write some seriously hot shit :D

Whoa, that was uber-hot, fuckinggoddamn! Lucky girl *thud*

Thanks, maybe chapter 3 will be even hotter....

Whoa, awesome chapter there, that was fucking hot! Great job!

Yeah Kris is pretty hot and thanks

It's a great start so far, Tanger is so fucking hot and anything with him in it is going to be awesome. Keep it up.