Lovesick - Comments

I like this, hope to see a new chapter. I do agree with the other comments, the layout makes it hard to read.

Hm... it looks good. :)
Though I agree with RunningFromHumanity; you may want to change the layout a bit because it's kind of hard to read. And on the summary page, the two pictures you have mesh together and it just kind of looks weird.
But you're doing great with the writing! Keep it up!
:D

Very cute indeed(:
I really liked the start of this, and I hope to see more of it soon(:
But fix up the layout a bit..sort of hard to read. Other than that, pretty great!