Turn On Me - Comments

  • lovelyhope

    lovelyhope (100)

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    This was so good. You used the quote in a completely different way than I imagined. I love how it was more a story about friendship than a love story. Maybe in the future Kennedy and Julia can have a relationship (at least in my mind they will hahaha) but I like how you ended with them just comforting each other. Adding in them suddenly falling in love with each other wouldn't have had the same impact. I loved how it was unique and different.

    Thanks so much for entering!
    February 11th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    well, well, well... look who wrote about Kennedy, huh? Oddly, not surprised there. I liked it. It was different. And I can obviously see your depression showing up all over the place in this. Just remember - you don't have to jump. You're not Hayden.
    February 9th, 2012 at 06:50am