Born to Die - Comments

Pierce_The_Sirens (100)

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DO NOT GIVE UP ON THIS STORY!!! Just stumbled apon it and I'm fucking in love with it!!! Plzzzzz update again! I'm writing an aa fanfic right now, ill even tell my readers to come read this! Plz update again!

November 7th, 2013 at 10:58pm

EveBxoxo (100)

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Pleaseee update soon! Loving this story :-) Ben is just a stud muffin man

July 28th, 2013 at 12:07am

murna (100)

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sooo good
update soon?? please

July 26th, 2013 at 06:04pm

flawless.unicorn (100)

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this is great omg:')
update soon please!

July 26th, 2013 at 12:56pm

itstonysrooftop (100)

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ohhhh mmmmyyyy ddddaaaammmnnn continue pleaseee

January 21st, 2013 at 02:37pm

Chester_420 (100)

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I fell in love with this story :) please update soon <3

December 2nd, 2012 at 11:43am

JustAnother_Andley (100)

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Please update soon :)
I'm liking the plot line.

November 23rd, 2012 at 05:13am

LiveFast.DieYoung (100)

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Thanks for your feedback. This is my first time writing so your gonna have to bear with me on the whole depth thing but I really appreciate everything you said

June 28th, 2012 at 06:54pm

Ryan Gosling (100)

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I really like where this is going, you have a great plot, I just wish you would get more in depth with the chapters and the details of the setting because it can get kind of confusing. But, I do really like the plot and the main character seems like my type of gal, so please, keep it up!

June 27th, 2012 at 01:41am

LiveFast.DieYoung (100)

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I'm working on it I promise :)

June 17th, 2012 at 11:34pm

anarchist- (100)

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Update again please! :)

June 14th, 2012 at 10:54am

LiveFast.DieYoung (100)

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Okay thanks for the advice, I'm glad your liking the storyline

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June 7th, 2012 at 12:30pm

hella lame (100)

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I like where this is going, but maybe you should find someone to edit your chapters. There are a few obvious errors such as punctuation and such. But I do like the plot so far, as I've already stated.

June 7th, 2012 at 03:45am