Desperately Reaching for Something in the Dark - Comments

  • Haley'sfreakingout

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    Aghhhh! I loved it! You're a great writer!
    March 29th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • AllTimeBatman

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    wish she would move back to maryland
    March 29th, 2012 at 05:39am
  • PhoebeAnna

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    I love this story!
    March 26th, 2012 at 10:21pm
  • Underdog425

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    Ah, yay!!
    March 25th, 2012 at 08:04am
  • Wendy.

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    awwwe. i love this story! please update soon? :)
    March 23rd, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • AllTimeBatman

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    yay they broke up now he needs to get ar back
    March 19th, 2012 at 08:26am
  • JenniferC1994

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    I'm literally felt like my head exploded when Jack let that slip. D: omg. I don't even know what to say right now cuz I wanna read what happens next to give you my full opinion.
    March 17th, 2012 at 11:43pm
  • AllTimeBatman

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    uh oh..this isnt good
    March 17th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • ally...

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    Hahaha Jack makes me laugh, that last comment was spectacular. Can't wait for the explosion next chapter!
    March 17th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • ally...

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    This is an excellent story. I like the characters you've laid out, and the only thing I have a slight problem with is how advanced Charlie's vocabulary is. Not the end of the world, but just something that stuck out. Can't wait for more.
    March 10th, 2012 at 08:59am
  • AllTimeBatman

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    i liked the update hope to read more soon :)
    March 10th, 2012 at 06:27am
  • JenniferC1994

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    The image of Alex playing with Barbies is one of the best things ever. No joke c: <3
    March 3rd, 2012 at 12:16pm
  • AllTimeBatman

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    i wish arianna and alex would get together again
    March 3rd, 2012 at 07:06am
  • JenniferC1994

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    Oh man. Alex reacted better than I thought he would c: but I have a feeling things are gonna get more dramatic. :3 <3
    February 28th, 2012 at 06:20am
  • JenniferC1994

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    Soo, another update tonight? Yes? Alright, you're amazing c; ahahah I loved this chapter. <3
    February 20th, 2012 at 06:20am
  • Princessplague15

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    Keep updating! This has a lot of potential!
    February 18th, 2012 at 04:36am
  • CheckYesLindsey94

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    Loving it so far! Keep updating please! :)
    February 17th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • JenniferC1994

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    I'm definitely interested in this story. :) another chapter maybe?? :D
    February 17th, 2012 at 06:56am