This was pretty entertaining, and I liked that it was too the point. You didn't drag out the storyline trying to make it longer. Simple and succinct. The only problem is I just couldn't get on board with the ending. If Zacky's fucked her ass before, he should know that once you're in the back door you don't go back. Instant yeast infection man! If you're lucky; it could be worse. But at least the characters have real personality. Overall this is a good piece.
March 13th, 2012 at 06:24am
