I Need You So Bad - Comments

Wow this story is epic so far!):)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Cutest thing ever :D can't wait for the next update :P

Aw :) So sweet :) Can't wait for more :)

i really like this story!! Update please? :) x

Thank you :D I love this btw, keep it coming :P

Love this!!

Wow...Tom is definitely awkward now...

Awwwww!!!!!! That was adorable :D you have to update again soon :P

Keep writing, this is some great stuff ;)

I loved it. Brady sounds way better than Tom :D

moorrrre!

Haha glad you cleared the whole Tom Brady thing up haha I am really not a sports person...anyway, loved the chap! Update soon! <3

Love it so far ! And yes Tom Brady is a football player :)

I think Tom defiantly!! He sounds SOO sweet!!! And ya, I think Tom Brady plays football, but I am not a sport person by any means...so I can't promise that I am right... Update soon!! <3

It is almost impossible to not like the goody goody boy! It is the bad boys you have to watch!! ;)
Love the story, update soon! <3

I like this, it's definitely a good start.
Is the whole story going to be in diary format?
Also, just as a suggestion, (you can totally ignore this if you want), you might want to change colorless brown eyes to lifeless brown eyes because brown is a color.