This was such a cute one-shot, and I can't help but not exactly like Caroline. I love how you described both her and Zacky's eyes, I can still picture them filling up with tears and the emotion that Zacky shows.
Your writing was flawless, the story moved at a very nice pace and I want to read so much more! I hate the fact that this is a one shot and that the sequel is coming in 2014.
Anyways, beautiful story, the only thing that I can possibly fault it on and that is the layout. I find it hard to read and a bit crowded to be honest.
Your writing was flawless, the story moved at a very nice pace and I want to read so much more! I hate the fact that this is a one shot and that the sequel is coming in 2014.
Anyways, beautiful story, the only thing that I can possibly fault it on and that is the layout. I find it hard to read and a bit crowded to be honest.