Eloquence. - Comments

I liked how descriptive it was; I felt like I was actually there. I haven’t really read anything like this before, but I really liked it and I can’t wait to read more of it. You did a really good job and I may actually go look at your other stories too, if you have some. :3

Wow! This was really nice to read, despite all of the dramam and the tragedy! Some of the techniques you use with your writing are really high quality and the level of description in the content is just the icing on the cake! :) I also think that I your layout is really well thought out and as in the comment below, I think it's stunning and contrasts with the content! Xx

I'd like to begin by complimenting your layout. I understand how difficult it can be making layouts, and your layout flows together nicely, it is very creative. However the font is a bit small.
As for your story I feel that you are a very well writer. Your writing technique is expertise. I also enjoyed that you incorporated dark themes and not just perfection, which is too often portrayed in stories.
Very nicely done.

I actually really adore this and your ability to bring in all the emotions together. It really is beautiful and despite the tragedy that occurs within the story, it has a graceful feeling about it. You’re really able to connect to the characters in the story without knowing every little thing. Very good job!

What? What is this? This is...no words. No words.

All I can say is... This is brilliant! I'm already in love with Loyd. The layout is gorgeous and I'm just a fan of your writing.

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