Teenage Dream - Comments

Good luck on the contest, that was a great story :D And I do love a smutty ending ;)

Aww I can't believe he remembered her after so long :) I like how you switched to Mike's POV, gives us a glimpse at what goes on in his head.

That was cute, I love how Mike recognizes her after all those years. I'd like to see Mike's POV too, imagine he surprised he was :D

What do I think about Mike and Sandy? I think they should be together just from how they were after seeing each other after all these years. I also think you should do some chapters, or at least parts of some chapters, from Mike's pov. Like the next chapter maybe, so we can see what was going through his head when all of this was happening and how he felt seeing her for the first time in a while.

Aww!!! He remembers her. Good think Green had a wingman not sure their story would be the same. Haha just think of the wedding toast...just imagine it.

Not sure how I feel about the flightless birds part since I am a pens fan, but eh you're stating a fact. Still hurts. Another year another season.

Update soon!

P.S. The chubby cheeks are the best. He's so baby faced it makes him seem innocent.