@ Hilltop Hi-Jinks YAY :D I just worry about it because it's my first story and I have everything planned, but sometimes things get lost because I get ahead of myself haha. But thank you for the lovely comment :)
I didn't spot anything that you'd have to fix. It's not something i think you need to worry about XD There's people who like your story for everything it is ^-^
@xXxpeebeejayxXx OMG! Thankyou so much for commenting, I was seriously starting to think I wasn't making it interesting enough hahaha. So again, THANKYOU! <3