Back Down South - Comments

*Comment Swap*
Wow. Your writing is breath takingily beautiful. I just love how you describe things, its amazing and so much fun to read. I didn't really connect with the characters though but maybe its just because there aren't enough chapters. Nice job :D

This was absolutely amazing. Just found it, and totally fell in love. Please, please update again soon! I cannot wait. :)

That was probably hands down one of the best sex scenes I've ever read on mibba. Props to you! :D I love this story and can't wait to read more.

Holy shit that was freaking hot!

Wow, that was really hot! Kudos on the writing for that chapter, hot damn that was really really great!

I love the direction this is going in!
Excited for more.

I like the color scheme of your layout and I like that the summary is the perfect length, cause one of my biggest pet peeves if when people write like five paragraphs just for the summary. I like how you write with proper grammar and proper sentence structure. and John and Madeline and pretty adorable with the way they interact with each other.

Aww! This was reeally cute, but noo why does she have to leave :c aw. But your descriptiveness was very good, and really helped me visualize being in arizona on a night like that.And your layout is amazing! Perfect for the Arizona setting :)

Even though it's just a simple picture, your layout is gorgeous. It's something that easily pulls people in, and you did a good job on it.

With the story, I love your descriptive details; they were absolutely fantastic. A lot of people here struggle with that aspect, but you rose to the occasion, so I applaud you for that.

ahh i really like this story!! haha that sly garrett playing match maker ;)

i can't wait to see where this goes!

Oh my gosh! Sneaky sneaky Garrett. And HA! Madeline stole John's pastry. I enjoyed that. I loved this update so much! Super excited to see where this goes next :)

love it! more please :)

Wow! The way you did that chapter was absolutely perfect!

So I just stumbled upon this story and I adore it!! I've totally been in a similar situation and you write so well :) Can't wait for the next update!!

So I just stumbled upon this story and I adore it!! I've totally been in a similar situation and you write so well :) Can't wait for the next update!!

Just found this story and I absolutely love it! I love the way you wrote the interactions between Madaline and John. This story is one of the best I've read in a long time! I can't wait until the next update :)

I'm your comment swap person and I am litterally blown away. I have nothing bad to say about your story. Not one thing. I actually have the biggest grin on my face because it must be fate that led me to this. Want to know why? My name is: MADALINE Janet GRACE Downton. I love this story and I really want you to update as soon as you can and your writing is amazing!