Tonight - Comments

This was adorable and one of those stories that give you a good feeling, a little tingle of hope you’ll experience such a moment like that with a certain person. My only critique is that I felt like more could have been added to the story, more so the interaction with Ville and Skye. I was sad it ended sooner than expected because it’s potential is good.

this was really good but felt like it was rushed through. However i loved how you described the relationship between Vile and Skye, and the end was absolutely adorable. the layout was great, but there were very few twists and turns to the story. overall, i think it was brilliant (sorry i left 2 similar comments, i'm new to mibba and didn't realize comment swap comments had to at least 200 characters long. but i really love your story)

also i loved the layout. :)

this was really good but felt like it was rushed through. However i loved how you described the relationship and the end was absolutely adorable. overall, i think it was brilliant :)

D'awwww this was so cute. Haven't seen a lot of Ville stories on mibba =(

very nice. Liked the layout and the story. Lie slowburnbaby, I think it was a little rushed. You could spend more time explaining the character's. Their feelings are important, but their actions are too. The story is good, and I think that you have a good thing going here. Be sure to add twists is the only thing I can advise. Twists to the story really do help with getting people to read and subscribe more. Good luck with the story, and never rush a chapter. If it takes a week, let it take a week.

This was good, Kinda rushed though, but for it being so short, you described Ville and Skye's relationship well, it would be interested to deepen it a little more :)The ending was really adorable and funny too.

Okay, first of all, in a brief word, I loved it. I suppose it helps that I adore Ville Valo, and you've portrayed him exactly as I've heard him to be. I like how you portrayed their love story, it wasn't too complicated; it was simple and absolutely lovely. I didn't see any grammar mistakes. Seriously fantastic work. :)