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  • FightWithTheMoon

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    I'm just going to cry. This is the saddest thing, it's adorable, but so sad. Please tell me there is going to be a happy ending? And if there's not, I'm going to read it anyway but i'm going to cry.
    This story is amazing!
    Please update soon and keep up the good work!
    August 26th, 2013 at 09:56am
  • whateverlee

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    Comment swap time!
    whoa this is interesting! i've only read 3 chapters but i decided to stop and comment before i read the whole thing so far. The chapters are really short, which is cool for how your doing the story, they seem like there getting longer though, i like how i have absolutely no idea on whats happening all i know is that it's very cute and it makes me sleepy if that makes any sense. Good job!
    February 24th, 2013 at 07:59pm
  • amykart

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    I found this through the comment swap. I enjoyed it but i'm not a huge fan of angels. I hold a high imagine of them and reading stories on mibba about them kind of ruin it for me. But it's a good story and it has potential. Btw the name Pallas reminds me of forgive durden's, razia's shadow
    February 20th, 2013 at 09:12pm
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    Hey! I am glad your trying to get back into this story. I am still here and can't wait for the next update!! :)
    January 7th, 2013 at 06:06am
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    I'm glad your still updating because i really love your story and i feel bad for not commenting as much as i use too. Keep up the updating! <3
    September 8th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • Skylight Madness

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    It's an angel story? Ah, I love it even more. The prologue already has me hooked. I would have liked to see a whole lot more detail in the first chapter though. That's the only downfall is that there was a lack of detail.
    August 24th, 2012 at 10:34pm
  • rochelle

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    This chapter was cute :)
    July 23rd, 2012 at 08:34am
  • DarlingggLover

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    I found this through the comment swap. I enjoyed it but i'm not a huge fan of angels. I hold a high imagine of them and reading stories on mibba about them kind of ruin it for me. But it's a good story and it has potential. Btw the name Pallas reminds me of forgive durden's, razia's shadow
    July 4th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • NonExistingUniverse

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    The first chapter already had me because I absolutely love when people write like this, it makes the story seem so much more interesting and truly adds potential. I love how you automatically add how the attraction set but didn't add to much detail. Then in the second chapter, I love how you describe the love and passion. It's great and simply soothing. Good job!(:
    July 4th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • antiwords

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    Your writing style is beautiful and your characters are fascinating. I love this so much. I thought I'd read a chapter to see if I liked it, and then I ended up reading all of it.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 07:57pm
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    Aww I feel bad for Pallas that he has to watch Alacray go through that. But, I want to give Alacray a big hug! I love this story so much. It's so different from the other stories I read. Keep on writing I'll be here waiting to read more of your writing !
    June 12th, 2012 at 07:00pm
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    Chello!! ^_^
    I'm glad you updated!
    The last chapter was very interesting.
    Is Alacray starting to remember?

    Ps. I love your writing style (:
    May 28th, 2012 at 12:59am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Hi!

    Just wanted to say, that this is wonderful. I love Alacray's voice. And the conflict between an angel and reaper. I don't think I've ever seen that pair. Only angels and demons, really. It's quite original and I'm very proud of you for coming up with that, since I don't think I ever would. It just wouldn't have occurred to me. And now I'm rambling. Anyways, I really love this and am excited to see where the story goes so update soon please!
    May 18th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • xxcityofdreamsxx

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    I love it!!
    Each chapter Ive read
    I wanted to know more.
    Keep updating!!
    May 16th, 2012 at 04:30pm
  • Bolts;;

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    This is amazing. I'm really loving how you wrote these chapters and you portray the characters so well. Amazing writing! :)
    May 13th, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • Oddities

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    I really like it doll! You should defiantly update soon, As I cannot wait to find out more(:
    May 12th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • rochelle

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    So far, I really like this. I'm interested to see where this goes. (:
    May 8th, 2012 at 10:44pm