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  • skinny love.

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    Absolutely love this!
    Keep it going (:
    May 27th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    NEEP. :) Ollie and Louis are SO CUTE. And their names end with the same syllable. Which makes them cuter. And I'm sorry that it took me so long to read this. Darn stressful weeks. :(

    But anyway, just...yes. Overall. This chapter was fantastic. I loved how Louis was just letting Ollie be super awkward before he finally got her some clothes to wear. Hahaha. That was great. And the GIF at the end...GAH. So adorable. Love Niall. Hee hee.

    Awesome update! Can't wait to read some more. :D
    May 26th, 2012 at 05:49am
  • collectivision

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    Probably a good idea to not tell the best friend who she's staying with...

    I love this so much, every time you update I want another one instantly.
    May 22nd, 2012 at 02:32am
  • collectivision

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    Told you I'd comment again when I finally got to see the gif. Liam's definitely worth a comment. I love your author's notes, they always make me laugh. And don't worry, I talk about One Direction like I know them too.
    May 19th, 2012 at 04:37am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Hahahaha. Oh my God, you make me laugh so hard. Your author's note was beautiful, as was the GIF.

    And I laughed SO HARD at the part where Ollie was telling her mother that she was staying with "Lou" the lovely old lady with all the cats. Hahahahahahaha. Oh my God, I just...I can't. It was so perfect. And it was hysterical how she made Louis drop his coffee when she walked into him. Just...awesome. I loved this chapter. OH, AND THE HARRY LINE. Oh my God, I should NOT have had a full cup of coffee in three seconds (almost, anyway). The caffeine has me totally nuts with crazy hilarity.

    And HOORAY! I'm making Liam do the cute dance. ;) Hee hee.
    May 16th, 2012 at 09:48pm
  • Minnesota518

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    Your authors notes are nearly as entertaining as the story itself. I approve. :))
    May 16th, 2012 at 06:58pm
  • collectivision

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    So my iPad's not actually showing me the gif, but as soon as I'm on an an actual computer I'll see it and probably comment again, just on it.

    So she's actually going to take Louis up on his offer, yay. And why, why does pussy sound like such a filthy word? I can't handle it, especially not in that context.

    I'm just going to be repetitive and tell you how much I love this again. Update soon.
    May 16th, 2012 at 05:53am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Alright, I finished. So now I'm going to start my official comment.

    What the crap are you doing fangirling over my stories when you can write like you do? God...*sighs* Anyway, I really like this story so far. I think that it's super interesting that this whole thing is a flashback. And the old lady has the same name as me! SCORE. :D

    And oh my God, your GIFs at the end of every chapter. They make me die. Like, die laughing, anyway. The Zayn one, pretty sure I reblogged that video from you on Tumblr...which is also why I won't be going to your Tumblr to follow you. Because I already stinkin' do. Hee hee. And the Harry one just made me laugh obnoxiously. But I did comment. Mostly because I like to comment. But also because I couldn't deny the boys.

    Your author's notes are also bomb, which I think I can say, considering I am also a fan of writing long, rambly author's notes. They're just more interesting.

    So, anyway, now that I've written a novel for a comment, I'll conclude by saying that I shall subscribe and eagerly await your next update! :D
    May 13th, 2012 at 06:19am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Alright, I've only read the first chapter, and I'll give a hardcore comment when I finish the whole thing, but that Louis GIF. Oh my God. I'm crying, I'm laughing so hard. Hahahahahahaha. Nice blindside.

    I'm going to finish reading now. Goodbye. :)
    May 13th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • ProudThespian

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    Like this alot! :)) Update soon
    May 13th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • collectivision

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    I love the way you've got this as like a flashback kind of thing, with her telling Kate her story. It's brilliant, and I love that Louis just instantly offers to let her stay with him and Harry. Like, really? The random stranger comment kinda applies there too.

    If I didn't love this story so much, I'd probably keep reading it anyway for the gifs at the end. They make my day. I love it.
    May 13th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • collectivision

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    I waited until I could see the gif before I commented, that's kind of sad. Still, it's the epic one of Zayn, so I'm not ashamed.

    I really love this so far. And I would yell at the weather, actually, I have yelled at the weather.
    May 12th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • Minnesota518

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    I actually really love this so far :))
    May 11th, 2012 at 05:15pm
  • collectivision

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    Commenting for Louis gifs, if I can stop laughing. Can I have more of this? Please? Like now? I love the way it's written. Not sure I'd have told a random stranger my name, but still, great start.
    May 7th, 2012 at 12:57pm
  • a lonely robin

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    Ohgod. That Louis gif definitely persuaded me to comment. Y'know, after I spent 10 minutes laughing my ass off.

    Anyways. I really liked this! Especially how you started with her telling the story. Real cool. Can't wait for more! (:
    May 7th, 2012 at 04:20am