Planned 2 - Comments

  • heretic.

    heretic. (210)

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    Because, let's face it kids, Bratt's real. YES!

    I loved this so much! I'm so glad it was just a story! Just imagining the three of them huddled around a laptop, sobbing into each other.. TOO FUNNY!!

    I love your portrayal of Brian and Matt, I could hug you this is so good!!
    September 2nd, 2013 at 06:03pm
  • suckonmytits

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    LITERALLY THE BEST THING OMG I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD
    August 4th, 2012 at 12:05am
  • Brian Haner Jr

    Brian Haner Jr (100)

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    ...my heart. Give it back! You cannot have it!!
    I'm glad it was just a 'story'...a story within a story.
    *Inserts Inception theme song music*
    Word of advice, don't do full sentences with capital letters, you can get in trouble for that. You can make them 'scream' just as effectively by having '!' after it.
    Over all though, I think you can tell I loved this little two-shot story series :D
    June 22nd, 2012 at 05:59pm
  • garrett hedlund;

    garrett hedlund; (100)

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    Lol, the ending, the beginning, and the prank!
    June 13th, 2012 at 12:14pm
  • I feel insane

    I feel insane (110)

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    Oh and I forgot-
    Because, let's face it kids, Bratt's real.

    If only..... -_-
    May 19th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • I feel insane

    I feel insane (110)

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    Ok, so I don't need to chase you with a pitchfork anymore ^_^ Although Planned was really well written (this one was too ;) ), I thought this one was cute and hilarious. The thing I like the most about the two stories together is that it shows your abilities to make your readers laugh and cry, and the contrast between the two tones work out really well :)
    Great job....again :D
    May 19th, 2012 at 07:09am
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

    xXxMCRsavedmexXx (100)

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    I LOVE this story! (Planned AND Planned 2) Planned was a little sad but so sweet though! And this was just all funny XD Matt was such a douche but it was so funny.
    May 15th, 2012 at 06:34pm