While You Were Sleeping - Comments

You should continue this story, it has so much potential. I'd really like to see what happens with them, does she really is falling for him? what about Roman? And her brother, does he finds out? I hope you are planing on doing a sequel or something (:

First off, I may start out by saying that I'm not exactly a fan of the layout since everything seems to be popping out in my face. The color scheme itself was something I disliked and normal with me, when I dislike the layout, I lose interest in wanting to read the story. Yet I did for you anyway.

Sexual content filled stories make me uncomfortable, yet I accept them as a form of writing and accept them if they are written extravagantly. You had some very nice touches here and there an I admit, I liked it. It seemed to be a good plot, missing a lot of detailing and thoughts, but still decent. Good work.

First I gotta say
I love your layout
Especially the background

I'm so happy you have a warning posted
Cause I know most stories like these don't have one, and it bugs me to no end lol

Anywho, I quite enjoyed this
I just love how you wrote this, explaining things without over doing it.
At time I wish this was more then just a one-shot to tell ya the truth.
I love how you ended it, some I've read they just can't seem to end it.
Your words are very beautiful in a way.

Keep up the good work
<3

Gosh! I love how you wrote this.. There are so words at the moment to explain how mindblown I am.. Haha "complete for now"?? :)