Loved the revisions! Please add a chapter 2 and then go ahead and add a chapter 3 and 4 and so on... Because I need to know what happens next. I feel like I've read this before, but I'm revisiting it as you're revising and I'm loving it all over again! So please, please update soon!
ahh i love this! the idea of camp counselors is genius and i can't wait to see everyone's relationships develop! at first i thought maybe jamie and zack would have a little something-something but now i'm thinking maybe something will happen with her and alex? i can't wait for another update!
Okay. Summer camp counselors? TOTAL GENIUS. I love this! And the fact that you're using my layout just makes me feel like a little kid inside, haha c: Please update soon!
I seriously love this so much. And thank you so much for not making Lisa a bitch. In some stories, she is but it helps the plot. In others, she is but it's for no reason whatsoever and that bugs me so much. So thanks, it's really refreshing to read a story where she's welcoming and stuff. More soon please! I love this!
I honestly was like "YES!" when I realized this was updated. Ah, how I love this story :).
I really do like how welcoming they are to Jamie. It's really nice and I just love the girls so much. Christina really adds that extra REALLY good dynamic to the whole story, GOOD CHOICE IN PUTTING HER IN HERE. I also REALLY want to see what they all are going to do about rett and Sara, its' going to be hilarious, and its going to be good - I'm ready!
Okay, Brett's an asshole. There's a difference between a prank and just being a complete dickhead. It's about fun, not about actually hurting people. Gotta love people, right?
Aw, the girls are so adorable! Getting candy and sitting in for the night. I really love those four, and it's only chapter four haha. I guess I'm kind of biased on liking Kara and Lisa though c:. haha I love how Christina dyed her hair because of Ariel, I've honestly thought of doing that ... no shame. I do feel bad for Lisa though, having to deal with Alex memories because he's always around. Breakups are hard enough without having to see that person EVERY day.
I'm so excited to know what this prank is, and just PLEASE update soon :D. You're such an amazing writer, and this plot just flows so seamlessly together.