I'll Keep You My Dirty Little Secret - Comments

Comment Swap!!

This was really good for a short story and the ending was GREAT. Everything went together well and I really enjoyed reading it!! I didn't notice anything grammatically incorrect (Maybe because I was totally into the story :)) Overall...Great Job!!!

WHAT I WAS NOT FUCKEN EXPECTING THAT THAT IS SO SAD AW.

I've never read a fic with this pairing before but I'm glad I read this. Actually, these two would make a really adorable couple. For some reason my favourite part was the ending. It didn't make me happy because I don't enjoy heartbreaks but it was something I didn't expect to happen and I like that.
But yeah, I really liked the whole story and it was very well written. Now I'll go and try to find fics with this pairing even though there but probably won't be many.

omg it was gooood, but why? why.? would you do that to alex? :(

This was really good. I liked how you made Christofer the one who knew what he was doing and Alex the vulnerable one. I liked how they had to sneak around behind their bands. It made it seem hotter. I have to say though I wasn't very happy with the ending. But kudos to you for coming up with something so great for your first slash.

please post more man that was awesome i loved it so much <5

I really liked this, surprisingly enough. I'm really not a fan of Christofer Drew (never have been) and I don't really read a lot of ATL fanfiction, but this was great.

Really great job, seems like I have competition (;

I really liked this! It was an odd pairing; I never would have put the two together. But the way you wrote made it believable, in a way. I like how you made Alex the more vulnerable one as well; most would possibly see him as the dominant type, while Christofer is the younger looking one who's shy and innocent. I liked the ending, how desperate Alex was for him to stay but how denying Chris was. There were some spelling/grammar errors I might have seen, but nothing that distracts greatly from the content of your story. I also love your banner! The simple layout was perfect for it, and I think you did a wonderful job for your first slash :)

comment swap;
Firstly, the ending was BAM! Hah and another, I'm not usually into stories involving two different bandmembers, but this was well written. You did a great job of making it a quick read, not lagging. Your writing is fluid and descriptive, so great job! :)

Wasn't expecting that ending! haha I'm not usually one for pairings between members of different bands, but you did a good job of not making it awkward somehow! o_O They would look kind of cute together anyway <33333

Omg the ending is so intense, love it!

That was really good. O.o
I definitely wasn't expecting the ending. I loved it, though! :3

*sniffle*
That was great! But it was so sad too... I love how you describe things and really pay attention to detail ^^
Anyways, I love it. Great job.