There Once Was a Time . . . - Comments

Yeah finally! Moore please :))

Well that is always a good reaction to the love if your life returning. Sexy time.
Love the tension throughout this entire bit you really kept us in suspense over if he was even going to return. At one point I must admit I did think he was gonna go. Glad he didn't though.

Er MER GERD.

AWWWWWWW
<3
They're adorable. :3

I wish I was as good as a writer as you my story are ok but your story is like amazing it need to be publish so othes can read it that how good of a writer you are

Omg omg omg omg omg omg that was amazing I'm so happy max finally realize that Ronnie need him and wanted him and omg that sex sends was just omg amazing hehehehee sorry for say omg so much haha I said it again sorry :) :) :)

Omg omg omg more more more pleeeeeeaaaasssssseeeee it's to good to stop there I have to know what happens next

You have to go on. I cannot stand the suspense. It is killing me.
I love the bit about him not expecting to live that long. Oh and the king. Bitches that was just brilliant. "There are some things a king just knows." Just that like. It's like a more powerful version if the parent one. Cannot wait for more.

OMG, more please!!!You just can´t stop here. I realy realy love this story!

THIS STORY IS JUST TOO CUTE. Urhazkclxuthkxivlxigvon peRFECT

Bro, shit just flipped times 10 over here.... shit xD I love this story so much.

I flipped the shit!!
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YUS!
FUCKING YUS!

Respect for the king!
:D

O: MAXIE
NUUUU
GO GET YO MAN

OMG MAX! update soon please :)

I feel so bad for him beacause he truely believes that it wont work and doesnt understand that you can't just deny your mating. You make me wanna cuddle him till his little emo side is all crushed.

You evil, evil person. That was so good and emotional. I feel like its set me up for the day.

NO DON'T DO THIS! DON'T LEAVE HIM! UPDATE SOON OR I'LL GO MAD

bAAABYYY NOOOO ;_;
I love the drama but PAIN D':

Max!!!!!!!!! Get your ass in that house now!