I really don't read stories to do with Twilight and I thought hey you know this one might be different and it wasn't bad but it wasn't too great either. I would love updates cause I am slightly fixated but yea. The best part is your descriptive writing and maybe you could use that too branch out (: Good luck
i got ur story again so umm.... came here on comment swap. im sorry i cant read this. twilight isnt not my thing. im sure ur a great wrter.. but no.. i cant i sorry.. u dont ahve to read my sory either. came here on comment swap. im sorry i cant read this. twilight isnt not my thing. im sure ur a great wrter.. but no.. i cant i sorry.. u dont ahve to read my sory either.
came here on comment swap. im sorry i cant read this. twilight isnt not my thing. im sure ur a great wrter.. but no.. i cant i sorry.. u dont ahve to read my sory either.
aw I love Twilight (weird coming from a girl who's a huge fan of Harry Potter, the Hunger Games, AND Twilight....) and this fanfiction is so unique. I've never found a fanfic about Paul before, but I'm not lying when I say I like it!!! in the book I loved learning about the pack. you have an awesome writing style, and I reaallllllyyy hope you don't desitate to update!!! keep up the awesome work!! :-)
I don't usually do Twilight fan-fictions(too much Edward. Blegh.), but I really like this so far! Paul's got to be my favorite of the wolves, and Ashley and Jordan are great characters. :) Update this soon! :)
I'm not too keen on Twilight fanfiction, however this certainly changed my view. Although its mostly the way you describe things in an exquisite manner, its also the fact that your style of writing is great. I wish you the best of luck with this story! :) x
I hate Twilight, but I liked this story. When I read that Ashley and Jordan had moved to La Push, I laughed. La Push is such a funny name :). You're writing style is awesome! Keep up the good work! :) I hope that you get more comments/subscribers, because you deserve it. Btw, the story layout is sooo cute!
I never liked twilight, but this was interesting. "There on the reservation you will seek out the answers to all of your questions", that was excitingly poetic. I've only gotten to the first chapter so far, but it looks like life could be looking up for Ashley and Jordan in La Push :P
To be honest, I hate Twilight. Actually, I mostly just hate Bella/Kristen Stewart. But, I do love me some sexy werewolves (; And Paul...yummy...I wish he'd imprint on me. "You got it chief!" Majorly awkward phone conversation there. Loved it! haha. Oh, and Todds a dick. Just sayin'. I hope you get six more comments!