Battle Scars - Comments

I love the update; Jeremy got what was coming to him. I hope Bryce can save Alli and help her to become a better person.

Sorry, I don't know why that posted twice.....(stupid phone)

I find it kind of odd (not in a bad way) that you just call Alli's younger sibling "Little Sister." Does she have a name, or is she a minor character that doesn't need one?
I'm bothered by the way Alli's parents just gave up on her and kicked her out to live on her own....I also don't like Jeremy; he's no good for Alli, and I think she can find someone better (like Bryce :P).

I find it kind of odd (not in a bad way) that you just call Alli's younger sibling "Little Sister." Does she have a name, or is she a minor character that doesn't need one?
I'm bothered by the way Alli's parents just gave up on her and kicked her out to live on her own....I also don't like Jeremy; he's no good for Alli, and I think she can find someone better (like Bryce :P).

This Jeremy character reminds me of my ex-fiancee; he was controlling, abusive, and unfaithful. Alli's feelings for Jeremy are similar to my feelings for my ex, and the way she doesn't know how to feel about Bryce reminds me of my not knowing how to feel about this guy who just walked into my life. I was so excited when I received a notification for this update; again, great work!

(I'm sorry for your loss. )

I really like what you've written so far. Keep up the good work!

It's going really well! I suggest that you find a layout of your story. Keep it up!