The Garden of Lust - Comments

I read this over 2 days and loved every chapter. I'm really excited to read the sequel and get up to date :)

Oh dear gods I just read the comments and I adore you all I hate and loathe JB as well Its actually HARD finding people on fiction websites that dislike him.

This story is going to be fun to read!

I know how you feelXD I have a Chronicles of Ember Stone series that I have four books in... I am only just on the second one!!! That's the one my fans are all over. Well I have to go to bed not. I am exhausted. I'll ttyl night!
... My point exactly.. Girls usually don't usually get low voices, so that explains why his isn't!

@ dudet95
I don't think he'll EVER hit puberty
And I know I am, but I need to get these done, especially my Garden series, it has 3 installments and they are taking for freaking ever to get done!

So did I!!! I literally turned to my mom and was like "Which chick pop star is this?" That was my exact words... I was very shocked to fins out it was a dude and I was laughing for days saying there was no way he's hit pubertyXD
Well then you're missing out on the lickable abb:P

@ dudet95
Yep, definitely not watching it then. I have quite a few stories to get out before my muse can change, cause once it changes it doesn't go back.

His voice is quite annoying, honestly the firs time I heard him I thought he was a girl.

Lol oooh it is going to change the moment you see ryan Reynolds shirtless! It's drool worthy! Haha yes I can not stand that little boys voice. It drives me insane how all these girls request it all the time because it makes me want to break my radio! I love music so that is saying something.

@ dudet95
Oh the more I talk to you the more I adore you!!!! (I hate JB too) I haven't seen the Green Lantern movie yet, I'm trying to get all of my Loki mojo done before I even allow the possibility for the muse to change.

Yeees I loooved ThorXD Him and Captain America were my thing for quite some time but I am more intrigued with the Green Lantern movie. I adore Ryan Reynolds so the fact he was in it I was like a preteen freaking out over Justin Beiber(eww) XD

@ dudet95
Aw thank you for the lovely compliments! Yes, Loki is my muse for right now, I feel like his character speaks to me and easily brings out the different heroins in my mind.

And there is no shame in reading a romance about Loki, first time I saw Thor I thought Loki looked funky and I hated his character, then I watched Avengers....8 times and I really got to know Loki's character and BAM I was hit with the writing mojo.

You don't have to leave a critiquing comment, just knowing that you enjoy the story is quite enough for me!

That. Was. Awesome!!!!!! I seriously envy your writing style. I am no where near your skills and you write steamy scenes better then I have really ever read on this site!!

The whole Loki thing must be like a muse for you because you write it with such passion. The lust and need jumps with every word. I will have to say I am not use to whole comic stories on mibba but I do like reading them.:) I am a sucker for the Avenger movie and I wanted to shank Loki so freaking bad and now I'm reading a romance book about him.XD Shame on me. lol

Anyways despite my rambling I didn't really see any errors I needed to point out, which is a good thing and a bad thing... The reason it's bad is because I have nothing critical to say about your work. No good advice:/ You surpass me on a whole nother level so it would be futile for me to attempt it!

Okay, I just started reading this about two days ago but I just finished up to the chapter today. Can I just start by saying, fuck holy hot damn everything.

The last chapter made me sad though, but I could see that happening and where she's coming from. Hopefully they get their shit together haha.

i knew he was going to ask her to marry but i did not see her giving the crown back! i wish she would have kept it and let his love develop! cant wait for sequel!

In a way I felt that he was going to ask for her hand however I felt that something was going to go wrong! I wasn't expecting her to decline though, I was thinking she would be kidnapped or something. Anyways, this was amazing and I loved it, I am very excited for the sequel! =)

ohhhhhhhhhhhh my god. definitely did not see that coming. but it was absolutely amazing!! your writing is absolutely perfect. now i cannot wait for the sequel!!!!!!!

I'm not done yet, but this has restored me back to normal. There has been a lot of drama recently with this guy who wants to take my virginity. I went from lesbian who may get with a guy, to, i will never tolerate heterosexuality ever again. With other Loki fics i was finding it hard to get back into them because of that, but that birthday thing you did has set me back on the course of happiness. I love you so much, thank you. XD

Okay I saw the proposal coming a little bit, but I didn't think he would make such a grand proposal like that. You are just a genius when it comes to surprises because her giving the crown back was superb. Will Loki become bitter with her rejection or will he continue to pursue her. I understand where Eva is looking for and why she gave it back, what if his feelings dont' advance further than caring for her? Being with someone who doesn't love you in other way than friendly isn't the way to go. So kudos to Eva for thinking on her own two feet and not being caught in the beautiful green eyes of Loki.

OMG I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! Well, the proposal sure! But Eva's decision?! Wow. In the sequel Loki will try fall in love with Eva? I seriously cannot wait for the sequel! AMAZING story, let me know when the sequel comes out!!

Those trust issues I mentioned? Just proved them.
Ugh. My feels.
I need the sequel now.

MY FEELINGS