Dodge and Burn - Comments

I do hope you eventually update this, because i really enjoyed reading this, and i'm in love with the title. So again, i hope you find time to update and keep us posted :)

Update soon please

Love it already.

Hey :D I absolutely love this so far, and I cant wait until you update again ^.^ You have excellent grammar and great spelling, too :D <3

I like it! A little confusing with the 'Kai' nickname at first since both siblings' names start with it though. Also, Kaiser doesn't have much of a personality yet for me, but maybe that's what you wanted. ;)