August 20th, 2013 at 06:16am
Dark Side - Comments
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i really love how this story is going! you are such a talented writer, you describe Lana and her emotions so well. please update soon, i'm really curious to see if Harry will tell Liam or not...August 20th, 2013 at 03:31am
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amazing chapter!August 19th, 2013 at 11:09pm
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Wow. I'm speechless.August 19th, 2013 at 10:06pm
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Perfection.August 19th, 2013 at 08:23pm
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Oh. My. Good. God.
I can't even right now. I know that sounds so incredibly unintelligent, but I don't even know how to describe the feelings that I'm currently having. The pacing of this story is absolutely PERFECT, and I love that we were able to understand Lana and where she's coming from for a full fourteen chapters before the truth was revealed to Harry. I just hope that the healing will begin, that Harry will be able to show her just how incredible she is.
This story really does keep getting better and better, and this chapter was written so beautifully. Keep up the fabulous work!
Also, there was a link in the story, but it didn't work. I just wanted to let you know. :DAugust 19th, 2013 at 07:58pm -
@ skinny love.
Awe. You're too cute. (: thank you so much. xoxoAugust 17th, 2013 at 06:08pm -
@ to the hopeless.
I actually did mean to use it! Haha thank you lovely! xxAugust 17th, 2013 at 05:59am -
You probably didn't mean to, but I saw my name in this chapter and I was like. Oh...yay!
Great update! I love this sad story. It has a lot of emotions..August 16th, 2013 at 10:56pm -
@ onlythegooddieyoung
You are so great. THANK YOU.
Your observations of the story really show that you're reading and understanding. Thank you so much :)August 16th, 2013 at 01:52am -
Okay, so I was just able to catch up on the past couple of chapters, and they were incredibly excellent. I loved the chapter with Lana and Holly because it was so normal, showing the interaction between the two girls who had been so wild in college trying to relive those days together. I think Lana needed the short distraction, and the fact that she got it was great.
And with the most recent chapter, you were absolutely right: Liam and Lana needed to have that discussion. Liam probably has no idea that his words made everything worse for Lana, but I guess we'll find out in time. :o This story just keeps getting better and better! Keep it up. ^_^August 15th, 2013 at 09:08pm -
@ Hannahd108
Definitely will - thank you for commenting! xxAugust 13th, 2013 at 03:52am -
@ Kentin.
THE MEME HAHAHAGA OH MY LORD.
Lol she is a difficult girl isn't she? ;)August 13th, 2013 at 03:52am -
please update soon, i love this story!August 12th, 2013 at 10:48am
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@ skinny love.
you're welcome, doll! Thank you as well.August 12th, 2013 at 06:29am -
This really grinds my gears.
I'm starting to hate Lana for wanting to blame Liam for everything, or at least just use him as an excuse. She's a horrible sister to me. Harry's gotta give this girl an intervention.August 12th, 2013 at 05:45am -
@ Stay Beautiful
Aw thank you son so much, you are lovely!August 11th, 2013 at 10:45pm -
@ aahkassidylyric
Thank you!August 11th, 2013 at 10:45pm -
@ evealata
With all these comments I may be updating more!
Thank you!August 11th, 2013 at 10:44pm -
@ Katherine-Lynn
Yes she didn't want to hurt herself but sadly she did. There will be many Harry- Lana moments! Thank you for the comment!August 11th, 2013 at 10:44pm
Loops about the link. Haha thanks.
And thank you so much you're so lovely I love your feedback! :D