Playing Those Hearts Like Toys - Comments

This is actually really great, I would be interested in seeing what will happen when Lara pops into the picture again. I love it that you enjoy Supernatural, and Doctor Who though!!

this is probably one of my favourite asking stories... really, so i please you to continue it... :D

This is a pretty ace story, I just sat and read it all
Update soon love!

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Just found this story and I love it! update soon?

Really love this! Keep updating!!! :)

Ahhh. Update soon(:

Hi, I just wanna say that I absolutely LOVE your story!
And that this Lara chick is CRAZY!!! Lol
Can't wait for your next update :)

I need a new chapter, omg. <3

Okay, so I used your directions and it worked! Now that I can actually read the story, it's pretty good! I commend you for writing an Asking Alexandria story, because for some reason I always have a hard time writing those. I'm not sure why, but it just happens. I think it's because I always want the character that's based on me (because I ship myself with James :D because he is my husband ) to be British so I always think that I should have it based in Britain and I don't really know how it is to live there, but I really don't want to base it in the U.S. I've never even been in the South or East of the USA so... Anyways, good story and sorry for rambling. I tend to ramble a lot.

The same thing that is happening to your_kats_on_fire is happening to me.

I'm not sure if it's just my computer, or the browser I'm using, but I can only see the picture of Ben, a grey line, the little things that separate the actually and the author's note and a bunch of text piled up on top of itself, so I can't read it. I think I might be having the same problem as the person who commented below me. I just thought you should know.
The summary for the story sounds good, though, so I'll read it if the layout ever works for me. :)

i dont know if its my computer or the site but your story isnt showing up on the page just the picture of ben is.

I actually really like this! It's unique. Haven't read anything that started out like that before. Update soon (: