Sweet Blasphemy - Comments

uhhmmm im not gonna say i got really turned on from this im not gonna say it but.... ermm great job!!!!

So I'm guessing this is some what a boy x boy fiction book? It seems that way. But anyway, I love the imagery details used in the story. It's great! and this is a awesome first chapter. Keep up the awesome work!

I don't really know how I feel about this. I've never been an Andley fan so this was slightly out of my comfort zone. Besides that obvious fact, this was pretty well written. Some areas could have been better/more realistic, but it was good as a whole.

Cooment swap! Aahh good thing is not femmeslash because I am way too disturbed when reading those kind of stuff. So yeah for not femmeslash! I personally love slash in boys only and when unread this, I don't know who's Andy and Ashley cause I don't read the summary and when I found out that it's a band, I was like holy shit this thing just get better, it's super cute and I agree with Ashley, I hate chocolate to the core. I don't know why people like it. Oh well, this is a very nice one shot ! (:

Ok so, I really like your story so far! You should update soon! Also i really like your plot (Excuse my incorrect grammar and capitalization.) i think your story is unique and i really like the way you write. I like your character names, but there are a few parts in your story where i got confused. The name is very unique and i like it. Where did you come up with the name from? And maybe post character picture so people don’t have to imagine what your characters look like, but they can see what you imagine them to look like. I like how descriptive you are because i know personally the more descriptive, the better. I think your story is very cute and sexy, which is a turn on for many people. I think your story is awesome, there’s thing here and there that need to be worked on, like maybe your wording in some spots, but nothing major. I am definitely subscribing and recommending your story! I found this through comment swap, and I’m happy I did. I hope this comment isn’t to confusing, because I know I didn’t word it the best. Keep up your story!!

haha niccce you know sometimes I feel like CC is watching me to... does this mean something? haha

I have never read smut like this, I loved it! Lol Your very descriptive which I like! :) Thanks so much for writing this peachy story *wink*

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That was one sexy oneshot! lol. I'm not sure who the characters but that doesnt matter, it was still hot. yeah...Im a perv and proud of it! ahahaa... make more you're really talented!

Fucking sexxy, that´s how it was L_L

haha I feel soo perverted right now ´cause I enjoyed reading this as hell, but this story is worth it :) it´s really hard to find good slash stories about Andley, but this one shot is super cute and sexxxy and great. I think I love you :P

P.S, just found out who these two characters are. Although I fucking hate bvb with a passion, I'm still subscribing. Your writing is that beautiful honey.

I love chocolate, but I think I'm gonna go to the deli after I finish commenting, and buy some peach jelly. That was fucking sexy! I'm glad I found this in the comment swap too. I'm sick of simple "ARGH, IM HORNY, LETS FUCK." You did a wonderful job, starting off with something as innocent as peaches, and turning it into a sex scene. I completely am in love with that strategy, I thank you for teaching me a smut lesson! Anywho, I'm subscribing, and I hope you will update SOON. Cause I want more. GIMME MORE!

Comment swap doesn't take me to many smut stories, so when I finally get to one I eat that shit up haha. Just first off, I am completely and utterly disgusted by chocolate as well. You write fantasically. It all flows together, which makes it much easier to read and possibly picture.I imagine that all that jelly was a bit difficult to clean up though lol. Good job bro :)

I don't usually get awed so easily on slash story, but this one is so good. Sweet, i have to say. i love the way how everything starts with peach :) Well, i think you gave me some sort of inspiration to write my very own slash fiction. ahaha! Good job well done, here :)

-Amelia

lol so, this is actually the first slash i've ever read xD and it was slightly awkward for me, cause i was afraid my mom would walk in at any second, but it was good :) lol i enjoyed it when i wasn't sure what i would think xD keep writing and doing what you enjoy, because your good at it <3 it was a pleasure reading your story :)

Dear sweet Jesus, this was hot. And the peach jelly just made it even better. I'm a huge fan of slash, I shall add yours to a small group of exceptions. Excellent job!

By the way, I found the part where the dogs came in at the end a little creepy, 'cause it was like they were tiny people and they were spying... But it was funny, too

Oh damn. Even though Andley isn't my OTP of choice, I decided to give it a shot because I'm a huge slash/smut fan. It was well worth it. <3

I'll be honest, I don't enjoy slash much. But I read this anyway, because I felt like I should give you an honest comment and not just pretend I read it and liked it. Although the topic wasn't my favorite, I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and your style. Nice work :)

I've always been a fan of slash. So yes, this interested me. I'm glad I just happened to receive this story in comment swap. Especially compared to the ones I usually get.

I like how this happens. How it plays out and just, the whole plot. This story is reaaally good and I hope you keep up the good work!
<3

OH WOW. I've never really been one for slash, but this was so interesting. I like how simple everything was, and even though I didn't really know the characters, I could definitely follow the story.
Keep up the good work c:

-Jess xx

I don't usually get awed so easily on slash story, but this one is so good. Sweet, i have to say. i love the way how everything starts with peach :)