Spinning. - Comments

Oh Lordy I think I'm in total reader-writer love with you. This is one of the best stories I've seen on here in a long time. Keep it up and I may make my way back to Mibba full time! :)

I am in love with your writting! That sex scene was perfect. It was filled with lust and yet so tender and cute. Perfect first time for them.
The whole Tessa and Jared teasing them was hilarious! I totally see them being their couple friends, going on double dates and everything.

Keep up the good work!

The "wuv, twu wuv." From chapter 14 was hysterical

The "wuv, twu wuv." From chapter 14 was hysterical

Oh wow, that was great. It really was. And I agree with WhoAreYouJudy, sex tends to change relationships! I can't wait to see what happens, where Jeret goes from here! :D

Sex tends to change relationships, I hope nothing bad happens!

I really can't think of anything to say but oh my god. (In a good way, I assure you. I want to say a 'very good way' but can't tell if that's crossing an uber pervy line.)

*slow clap* That was great!! Especially being your first time and all ;) lol Seriously though, I've written more sex scenes than I'd like to admit and this was perfect, not too raunchy not too sweet. I just love Jeret so much. Your characters just give me so many feels!!! :)

I'm reading last chapter again (as usual) and let me tell you something: i like how i don't see things coming. I also like the way all chapters are really really long. You don't hold back at any point and that's just awesome. You take your time even is that's means we're dying to read the next thing.
Great job!

Awww this was too cute! That was literally the most perfect first date! I really can't wait for you to update again! (: John and Beret and the cutest relationship although the whole thing about her getting sick is resting uneasy at the back of my mind and with your writing I have a feeling it will be devastating,haha

LORD that was perfect. I loved it! I cannot wait until the next. UPDATE NOOOOOW! :) (ps, sorry for two comments. i hit enter before i was supposed to, ha!)

LORD that was perfect. I loved it! I cannot wait until the next. UPDATE NOOOOOW! :) (ps, sorry for two comments. i hit enter before i was supposed to, ha!)

UGGGGGH

This story is great!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can we get the next one tonight?! PLEASEEEEEE! hahahah!

Wow you update a lot! :) I've been busy so sorry for the lack of comments! They're finally together and they're just too cute *-* anyway hope everything's fine with your brother's gf :) xxx

This is so great. Like, honestly, I check my e-mail all of the time, just waiting for an update. You never fail to amaze me and each time I read a chapter, I get more excited for the next! Love me some Jeret!! :D

See? The person below this comment is probably the only one (besides me) that has pay any attention to the "sick part". I'm hoping the sick part is about being pregnant. Really. If Beret dies, I'll cry for days.

I HAVE A QUESTION. who gets sick?? I'm confused.

I've been staying with cousins and just had a chance to catch up, but ah! I love it! Jealous John is adorable, and alliteration! Also, I hope your brother's girlfriend is okay! But more of this is necessary. Agh the fluff is killing me! In the best way possible.