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  • ginnygene

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    Your descriptions are so good. I could totally see every single thing that was happening. Eventhough It kills me, I like how this story is going slow, which only makes it so real. It's nice to see how playful, shy they are and yet so into each other.
    I also like the fact that so far -i'm still worry about the sick part- there has been no big tragedy or some unreal argument between them, but just real facts, real shyness, real wonderer if the other one feels the same way or not.
    Thanks for keep updating so fast. I can't wait for today's chapter.
    July 7th, 2012 at 07:08pm
  • andloveisaword

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    I loved that little scene, holy cow. It was amazing. I just love Beret and John. That is all. I can't even - ugh, it's just perfect.
    July 7th, 2012 at 06:43pm
  • OrdinaryRiches

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    I love the suspense, honestly. It's killing me in the best way possible.
    July 7th, 2012 at 08:39am
  • ginnygene

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    I can't handle how cute they are. They've been taking care of each other for a while now and it's just beautiful. Though, I think John kind of needs to get his shit together. Sometimes I feels like he's there with B, he wants to be there (and more if you know what I mean) but yet he stops himself for some reason. I would love to know what's in his mind.
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:30pm
  • andloveisaword

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    Okay, this was just too much to handle. I can't even process John and Beret's relationship, because it's so cute and lovely and perfect. Their chemistry is so fantastic. One of your best chapters yet! I can't wait for the next one! (Like, literally, I can't wait. You should update asap, you know. ;) )
    July 6th, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • trixilla

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    I just found your story and fell in love. I want another chapter nowwwwww!!!! keep it up!! xxx
    July 6th, 2012 at 11:28am
  • OrdinaryRiches

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    Ah, I just read this, in bed, ready to go to sleep and now I'm really excited and hyper and not at all ready for sleep! It's so cute!
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:29am
  • scanth3rad1o

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    I really can't deal with how much I love this story. And you! For updating so much. Thank you for keeping me entertained! :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 09:40am
  • taylorkelsiemiles

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    The last comment pretty much sums it up! hahaha :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 07:57am
  • ginnygene

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    If anyone else is reading this and can't sleep and want another chapter from this fantastic story, I recoment to start a riot just about now!
    WE WANT MORE!!!
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:48am
  • andloveisaword

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    I can't do it. Literally, I'm on the edge of my seat. I just love the interactions between not only Beret and John, but Beret and all the rest of the crew, too. I know I say it all of the time, but this is just written perfectly. I can see this all happening as plain as day. Seriously, keep up the great work - and keep it up like yesterday, 'cause I don't know how long I can wait for another chapter! ;)
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:27am
  • it'llalwaysbeyou

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    eep i love it! update soon :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:12am
  • ginnygene

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    In fucking love! <3 I hope there's gonna be another one tomorrow.
    July 6th, 2012 at 03:44am
  • xoxomarta

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    this story is amazing! most stories focus more on the background plot and include way too many flashbacks that just make the story all the more confusing, but this is so cute and well written! Cant wait for an update!
    July 6th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • OrdinaryRiches

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    The problem I have with a lot of John Oh stories is the way they're written, with more focus on plot than grammar and style, but I love the way you write! It's a cute story, but well written, too.
    July 5th, 2012 at 09:54pm
  • ginnygene

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    I've read this chapter 4 times! no fucking shame! post more today please!!! i'm begging you!!!!
    July 5th, 2012 at 09:28pm
  • andloveisaword

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    Love these babies. So perfect. Can you update this, like, yesterday? Haha, I just love this so much. It's so well written and I love that Beret and John are cuddle-buddies... :) I can't wait for more!
    July 5th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • ginnygene

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    I love you. okay. lol. i wanna hug them both! They're so cute! and cuddle with johno? that doesn't sound so bad at all... moreeee!
    July 5th, 2012 at 01:17pm
  • something beautiful

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    this is seriously my favorite thing, ever. okay.
    July 5th, 2012 at 12:35pm
  • ginnygene

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    Hapy B-Day btw! <3
    July 5th, 2012 at 02:05am