That Little Box That Beats In Your Chest - Comments

  • Love 'n Vain

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    Really good! I hope she doesnt go over board, you know about not eatting. Everyone is beautiful in their own ways! Fuxk what Zack said! He was drunk... I hope they get closer though and he stops her from self harming. Please continue soon!
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • Kora1234

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    I was so pissed when I found out jack and Alex are gay but the stories just way to good to hate or stop reading because of this one thing. It's an amazing story btw! But do you think you could keep the whole gayness down to a minimal haha? I think it's a nice twist and all but there's just something about guy on guy relationships that turn me off haha. Im not a homophobe if that's what your thinking haha, I support the gays haha. Keep writing its so good! Oh and it's your story do what you think it's best, feel free to ignore my comment I don't really care haha, I'm sure whatever you come up with will be awesome! Can't wait for the new chapter, update soon!!
    August 4th, 2012 at 07:43pm
  • herestothetimes

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    I really love this story, please keep updating it! <3
    August 3rd, 2012 at 09:46am
  • ValeLizGaskarth

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    UPDATE SOON PLEASE IM DAYING!! <3
    July 21st, 2012 at 09:26am
  • heart-of-rock

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    I'd like to thank every single one of you who have commented on these past few chapters... I'm glad you guys like the Jalex :) @letsburnthiscitydown: Thank you, I'd like to clear some things up, though. The purpose of the story is to show Lacey's relationship with All Time Low, not her self hraming. Though that is a very important element in the story's plot, it's not the focal point. The assumption as to Alex's romantic habits were simply a comment in passing to throw the readers off the scent, so that I could surprise them with the Jalex later on :) But I really appreciate the feedback, and I will definitely work on adding that mystery in this story... Hopefully I didn't disappoint too much :)
    July 19th, 2012 at 12:19am
  • letsburnthiscitydown

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    I like the story and I like the concept, mind you I'm only on chapter 4, but there is no mystery to the story. Everything has already been given away to me. The reasons behind her self harming already there, the assumption that Alex is a womanizer, and all of that. There isn't much depth. I mean the idea is good, but it just wasn't approached the right way in my eyes. But I still like it :)
    July 18th, 2012 at 10:55pm
  • all time perv.

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    ksfhsiefsdjnbfvlewxdfv Jalex okay JALEX
    and oh my God, the blood... sdlkxbvjfx
    CLIFFHANGER IS A BITCH OKAY
    okay you need to update soon.
    xoxo
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:06pm
  • ValeLizGaskarth

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    omg!! such a twist!! i hope lacey and zack kiss already! and if he founds out about the cuts, that he support her <3
    July 16th, 2012 at 08:27am
  • alleson

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    ahh this is amazing! Love it <3 and nice cliff hanger ;D even thought i hate them their usefull in writing
    July 16th, 2012 at 04:41am
  • woaahkelsey

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    Ahhh! Jalex Is In This Haha! This Story Like Makes My Life, I Hope You Update Soon! I Hate Cliffhangers... -.- I Kinda Hope She Tells Zack The Truth But I Don't Think That's Gonna Happen... Not Until Later At Least.
    July 16th, 2012 at 12:25am
  • RachaelInRansom

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    Loved the update! I can't wait to see how everything plays out.
    Amazing story, keep it up!
    July 15th, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • Love 'n Vain

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    Seeing the update made me smile(: Anyways I think Zack is gonna end up figuring out about her cutting, and I still hope Zack and Lacey end up together. Been thinking that since the beginning(:
    July 15th, 2012 at 07:44pm
  • earthtosammie

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    Ah, I like how long this chapter is. You should start making them longer like this. :) ugh, I hate cliffhangers. Please update soon! :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • earthtosammie

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    Ah, I like how long this chapter is. You should start making them longer like this. :) ugh, I hate cliffhangers. Please update soon! :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • ValeLizGaskarth

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    she has to be strong!!! I'm sure the guys will find out suddenly and they are gonna to support her but she has to be strong <3 I'd like that she end up with Jack, seems he's really nice & take care of her <3<3 update soon please (: <3
    July 9th, 2012 at 05:21am
  • citiesareafraid

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    I love this so much! I think she will end up with either Zack or Jack, not sure which though <3
    July 8th, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • Daydream-away

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    I love this!! I think Alex:)
    July 7th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • Love 'n Vain

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    Update soon(: And I think Lacey will end up with Zack or at least I hope. Like this story! It's very well written!
    July 6th, 2012 at 08:37am
  • elisegeree

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    I really enjoy this :) Update soon please! <3
    July 6th, 2012 at 08:32am
  • earthtosammie

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    I love this story! I think Lacey will end up with Jack, but I'm not quite sure yet.:)
    July 6th, 2012 at 06:50am