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I was crying like the entire time D:

Louis! Poor Louis, having to suffer through being sliced open and examined like some seventh grade science project. And definitely poor Zayne, having to watch Louis suffer through all that and not be able to do anything but just watch. This really hit me hard, because my mom is going through almost the same thing. I can definitely empathize for Zayne. This story is wonderful (except for when you typed "catched" instead of "caught" in the first chapter). -A

This is amazing, truly amazing. I was crying really hard, I'm not sure if it's because I'm really emotional at the moment or just because this is so sad.
Poor Zayn, him and Liam make such a cute couple.
This is so sad but brilliant okay.