I don't normally read stuff like this but wow, this was actually good. Loki is from the avengers, right? My friend's totally obsessed with him. Haha. I hope that's who you are writing about in this story. But yeah, I really like Your style. One shots are usually leaving me wanting more details but yours was pretty spot on. Real potential in you, man.
@ TARDISblue This I'd actually a sequel to another one-shot that I created to the reason why you didn't like the title is maybe because you didn't read the other one as well.
I actually liked this story very much, yet the title was a little cheesy. The layout could have had a lot more work to draw the reader in a little more, but what I really loved was the imagination and detail that you gave.
Loki is from the avengers, right? My friend's totally obsessed with him. Haha. I hope that's who you are writing about in this story.
But yeah, I really like Your style. One shots are usually leaving me wanting more details but yours was pretty spot on. Real potential in you, man.