Two Is Better Than One - Comments

@ thatscalledyes
thank you soo much!!(': <3333

I don't know about everyone else, but I get where you were going with the whole story thing. I'm not really confused at all. Okay, anyway... OMG I LOVED THAT. THE END WAS SO FUCKING CUTE LIKE HOLY SHIT UPDATE NOW. OMG. I LOVE THIS.

@ ScoutNikhol
I'm not offended, I'm just explaining the confusion. And no, it wasn't a writing error, it was on purpose. Because I kind of wanted this part of the story to be that at first it seemed like she had done worse things than what she really did, but then it didn't end up being that way when she told her real story.

It said her parents died then she lived with her siblings...but she said they all died at once. (That seemed like just writing error when you forget what you've previously written) Don't be offended, please. I just got confused.

So guys, if anyone else is confused, I know that what Ashley read on Google about Averi doesn't match with the story she told him, but I meant for it to be that way. Ashley thought that Averi did worse things than what really happened to her, so he got all mad, but when he found out the true story, that's when he felt bad for her. I'm sorry, I just kind of wanted there to be a slight change with her story!

@ ScoutNikhol
I understand the confusion, it's meant to be that way actually. It's realistic anyways, what you read on the Internet is never true. So Ashley judged her too quickly and then when he found out her true story, his heart went out to her.

No offense...I'm totally confused. You need to re read some things like the bio he read then what she said...see things like that. Sorry unsubscribed

@ thatscalledyes
ikr i love them too! and yeah, she's been through a lot. but thank you!:D

@ guysinmyhead
thank you!(:

Why doesn't this have more comments? I love it, keep it up!

Ommgggg awesome chapter! Averi's story is so sad ): i loooooovee the used! Omggg cant wait for more(:

@ LunaGreenDay
thank you!!:D

@ thatscalledyes
omg thank you so much! iknw its been a long wait, school started and i've been really busy! ill get started soon though!

I have only read up to chapter 3 but i admire your style of writing, and how you really show what they are thinking and feeling. your an amazing writer :) i will continue to read your story and enjoy it :) from izzy <3

Aww.... Poor Andy :( Great start to an amazing story though!! :D

ohhh myyy godddd. I just found your story and I read it in like 10 minutes. Pleaaaseeee update this. Oh my god, it's so good! (:

Asdfghjkl; update!! I love you <3