All the Little Things. - Comments

I'm still dying. This story is just too amazing. AHH! Not only do I love Young the Giant, but I LOVE Gemini and Leo. Holy shit. Too much amazing in one story.

He's blind?! What a twist!
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AW LEO :(
MY CREYS. HE'S BLIND. I saw the comments before I read and I thought everyone was talking about how he was figuratively blind, NOT LITERALLY. Sorry if I ruined that for anyone who looks at the comments before too but this genius comment sidebar IS KINDA HARD TO MISS. Anyways, poor bb. I love that he's optimistic!

Hey wait can Ryan Lochte serenade me instead? I'd feel bad if Tom, your man, serenaded me... ;)

Asdfghjkl LEO.

I just love this story. I really do. I love that Leo is so fucking optimistic even though HE’S BLIND and gem is just like, hating on the world. Sort of. I love that they’re total opposites but whatevs cutest couple in the world, they totally balance each other out. The way you write this is just so perfect in every way, and every time a new chapter comes I get so excited because it’s one of my fave fics on here.

I think the thing I love the most though is how Leo’s chair saved her. WHEN I READ THAT I LAUGHED. Even though she tried to commit, I just thought that was so ironic. And such a creative way to almost die!

Okay I’m done rambling now. Can’t wait for your next update :)

OH MY GOD. THIS NEEDS TO BE A BOOk. IN MY HANDS. GAHHH. I love it so much!!

Oh my gosh. This chapter.
Depressions scares me. The things people go through.
Yikes.
A nice chapter to lead us into something more!
I like it!

To become depressed after someone says: “Your birth certificate is an apology sent to your parents from the condom factory." Huh. That's a little dramatic, Leo.

BUT I STILL LOVE HIM. HE'S SO ADORABLE :3

Lol Colton Haynes...?
Ok!
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Well, damn. This is beautiful too.
Would you, darling, do me a favor and produce a real life Leo for me? That'd be lovely.

I REALLY LOVE LEO. He's wonderful :3 and haha his speech made my day c:

I want more, soooooon <3

The first chapter was marv. I loved that she fell on his couch. Like, that's so cute. And I love the names, btw.

Second chapter, HIS SPEECH. Hahaha, oh my gosh. I love your characters.

Basically I really really like this story! I'm super excited to find out where you'll take it! DONT ABANDON THIS STORY.

Oh and let me say, I love this layout. The banner is sooo adorable.

I realy like this story in that it's both character AND plot driven. Leo and her are opposites, and we all know opposites attract ;). but i like how he was very casual with everything like "sorry my death ruined your death" i dont know, i relaly like this chapter already. haha Leo as a porn star, i feel it! I really like this story, youve done a great job with an amazing idea C:.

but i'm curious... the beginning is her journal, right? and then the rest is her day afteR? orr? im a bit confused, im sorry!

Ooh... new story, I see! :D
I just read what you have of it, and I really love it already. Aha. :D Though that shouldn't be a surprise since you're an amazing writer. :)
I'm gonna note one thing in the second chapter:
'It's as if Leo has the whole floor to himself because it's like on big studio.'
I think 'on' should be 'one', no?
But other than that tiny thing, this is looking great! :D
And I loved this line:
'Did Leo's dimples count as one little thing or three?'
I just, it shows how much she's already starting to care for him. I don't know why that line struck a nerve, but it did.
Maybe because it shows she wants to remember him more by contemplating making his dimples count as three separate things? I think that's what it is, if that explanation at all makes sense.
But anyway, can't wait for more!
Definitely subscribed! And recommended also! :P

I LOVE LEO.
and you. :3

update soon, won't you, Kantiz? :)

I like how she doesn't even realize that she likes him yet.
Gosh Leo is just too funny.
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Dear lord, this is beautiful.
Already subscribed and recommended.

IM DYING. THIS IS AMAZING.

YAYAYAY SHE'S NOT DEAD
I really like how her name is Gemini. And Leo, Leo is hot. Different-colored-eyes Leo is HAWT.
The only thing is, she fell from like 5 stories, and even though she landed on a couch, I feel like she'd still be in a lot of pain. Like, unable to have witty banter kind of pain but you know what? I LOVED THE WITTY BANTER SO IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER.
Elevator speech... that's awesome. Seriously. I've never heard that but sdkjfsofjwo that was wonderful
I cannot wait for this to continue!!!! :DD

I don't know if you know this, but this story is flawless already. There's so much flawlessness and I just love it a bunch <3