It's Always Been You - Comments

I prefer it as a oneshot, like it is. If Callie was the jealous though, her doubts about her man wouldn't have vanished just because he told her what happened at the club. Its good she trusted him. Anyway, I like that you have no writing mistakes and how the whole chapter was written. That's all from me, bye. Xd

I prefer it as a oneshot, like it is. If Callie was the jealous though, her doubts about her man wouldn't have vanished just because he told her what happened at the club. Its good she trusted him. Anyway, I like that you have no writing mistakes and how the whole chapter was written. That's all from me, bye. Xd

Comment swap brought me here and well gosh dang, this is just the cutest thing that I've ever read. And I agree with the comment below mine, it definitely as the potential to become a full story, maybe following the trials of these adorable newly weds. Very good job with this one hun, keep it up! :)
Wishing you all the best,
-Meghan <3

Here from comment swap. I liked it, it does have good potential to be a full-out story. The dialogue was cute, and I lovelovelove that layout! It was a nice length for a juicy chapter, a bit lengthy, but not enough to scare a reader off. This story is really good, and I like Callie's character! :)

Honestly, I think you really could have put more club smut and spy girlfriends into the story. It's Kesha inspired after all.

But to get down to the point. The beginning was hilarious. I mean the whole sneaking girlfriend thing is nothing new but you made it work. I loved the part where Callie was sitting back and laughing at the boys about the beer run. It was just so perfect.

I love this, I think it would be an awesome full story. Hope you go through with it!

Loved it, got great potential for a full story.

Really good story, great writing skills! Thank you for sharing it.