I Love My Brother's Best Friend. How Cliché. - Comments

  • sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb

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    aahh i missed this SO much. please please update soon
    February 15th, 2013 at 09:49pm
  • HypothermicCats

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    @ hannahlovex3
    I'm sorry about that. I've been posting the most recent chapters from my phone and it's harder to edit the text. I'll be sure to change it when I get my computer next month. xx
    August 21st, 2012 at 09:10pm
  • hannahlovex3

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    the story seems good so far but my only advice is to put spaces between paragraphs so its more readable
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:30pm
  • Hardly.Harley

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    A great read. Teenage drama at it's finest. There were a few mistakes here and there, but over all a very nice story. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'll definitely be checking out the rest. This is a great teen drama story, and you're taking a cliche storyline and giving your own creative spin on it. I appreciate that. Great job!
    August 20th, 2012 at 08:31pm
  • sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb

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    yay, finally! :D
    August 20th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • GiraffeGiraffes

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    yaaaaaaaaaaaay:3 new update!<3
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:24am
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    blah, another chapter please! you're all i've got at 3:40 am
    July 13th, 2012 at 09:41am
  • GiraffeGiraffes

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    this is a really good story:D
    July 12th, 2012 at 09:27pm
  • With-Eyes-Closed

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    Pshh, commenting again, no big deal. This story is actually really good! I'm glad you're going to slow it down a bit though, I like stories that are on the long-er side. I also really like the fact that I can relate to this story, there's always that one ass-hole guy that you know that you really don't want to like, but you feel a bit compelled to. Anywho, you're doing a great job with this story, keep writing! :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb

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    can't wait for the next chapter! this is really good :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 09:08pm
  • With-Eyes-Closed

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    I'm really excited for this story, it's really interesting so far as to where it's going! You're a really great writer, can't wait for Chapter 4! :)
    July 10th, 2012 at 04:17am