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  • A S K I N G .

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    It was beautiful. I loved how they had nick names for each other, and I laughed a bit when he mentioned the cold feet. You did really good on portraying such deep emotions and a bond in that chapter.

    <3
    July 20th, 2012 at 07:02am
  • Unexpected.

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    Oh my goodness.
    That was amazing.
    You write so beautifully. I mean. Wow. Honestly. That was magnificent!
    *slow clap.*
    Your description was amazing and you really had me believing in it. It was so beautiful. Just... I'm speechless. I loved the bit with the soulmates too. Just... Amazing, truly. Don't ever stop writing.
    July 14th, 2012 at 05:44am
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