Unlocked Hearts - Comments

please write more of this!
just read all of tongue tied, still not enough tom hiddleston.
i love how different this story is to the other one..
woo! :)

This is quite good so far and I can not wait for the next chapter!!!

Oh my goodness. Kelsey scares me. But I like Evangeline and, of course, Mel. I hope Tom treats her right c;

This is interesting :) I love it, please continue!

Oh man the friend texting the guy is so something one of my friends would do (they are that evil lol). I want to see what happens on there date, wonder if the other guy will randomly be there to create some tension...dun dun dun. I can't wait for the next one.

Kelsey needs to be aware that she's crazy, a bad crazy. Maybe she loves Garron and that's the issue? hm.. even so, nothing justifies her actions towards Melrose.
I love Evangeline already! That's what a good friends would do: text the cute guy haha. Besides she's so honest, I really do like her haha.
Ohhhh and her encounter with Tom made me blush haha. I bet their date will be perfect la la la.

Haha, that sounds like something I would do.. Hehe xD so maybe a date scene, maybe not, that was really specific huh? But at least there will be more Tom. I wonder if Kelsey was it? I suck at names xD anyways, I wonder if she'll chill the heck out or just be bitchy for the rest of the time. hmmm.. Good chapter.

Okay 1) would it be horrible inappropriate to ask for someone to bitch slap the shit out of Kelsey? 2) I love this new friend, she's epic, especially for texting Tom. lol Tom is so good to roll with all this, he's such a dream.

Please continue!
Love this!

Loving it so far! Hope you up-date soon ^_^

Well I started out thinking Tom, but thought it would be too predictable. So I was waiting for his arrival in the story instead :D I'm starting to like Melrose's character even more than before. She's already so loveable. Hmm.. I'm not sure if she'll call him or not, maybe a text instead? And I wonder how the reaction will be when she tells the story about her date. Hmm.. Maybe some girl group pressure is what she needs to get in contact with Tom. Idk.. I don't know her character enough yet. Good chapter.

Ok those two need to get together like soon. Because her date had no right to be that much of a jerk XP And that was an interesting way to meet him. I can't wait for the next one to see what she is gonna do with that number.

I love the name Melrose! And I love the character herself already. Particularly, her personality :)
I was secretly hoping that her date would be with Tom but then there he was *.* That asshole Garron -.-' He doesn't even stand a chance against lovely Tom!
I hope she calls him.... I want her to xD

okay 1) I was absolutely fucking floored when you didn't set her up on the date with Tom, I was like seriously 'what the fuck is this shit???? where is my Tom!' XD but then you like added him in in the sweetest way possible!!!!! I could so see Tom doing that, he's just so sweet!
2)I hate Garett or whatever the hell his name is, he's a prick.

Mel and Tom need to hang, now.

awwwwwwww so cute!!!!!!

This sounds pretty cool so far. It could be really good. As far as I can tell by the first chapter, you write well, there is the right amount of detailing so far and the character introduction is good. So yeah. Subscribing and looking forward to more.