I've never read Maximum Ride, but one of my best friends really likes the series. I like the story, but there are some things that I don't like about it. There's no explanation from the doctors what happened. Everyone's just going along like this is perfectly fine and normal. I love the bit with Cam, though. I think that's an awesome power, and I love the way you described it. I wish there was more description in other places like there was in that excerpt. I know that it was very boring stuff, but I really like to know what the setting looks like.
There was also a bunch of grammar and spelling mistakes. I could point them out, but I'll give you the opportunity to PM me. I would really like to help you, since I like this story a lot. It definitely has potential.
There was also a bunch of grammar and spelling mistakes. I could point them out, but I'll give you the opportunity to PM me. I would really like to help you, since I like this story a lot. It definitely has potential.