this is fabulous, okay. i love it, smut is great, no smut is great, whatever you feel comfortable with bc yaknow...your story. i really love it though, update soon!
Oh no, this is a really complicated situation. On one hand Leah is right to be afraid and all, but at the end I feel like she overreacted a little bit... just a little. But who am I to say if she's overreacting? I've never been in that kind of situation, and I hope I never have to be *touches wood* so I have no right to say how Leah should feel. And in the other hand, poor Brian!!!! Man cannot catch a break! God, I liked this chapter. Keep em' coming! :D
Poor Leah and Brian like he is trying to prove to her tht he cares for her and everytime he does something nice it gets backfired and it makes it looks like he doesn't care, it's all fucking Mike fault I can't stand him right now omg seriously leave, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I literally love this so much, I've been reading it for nearly two hours, and i'm only up to Chapter 20! (Just started actually) Love it so much! I gotta go to soccer training but I actually will come back and read it omgomg
Hello! I really like this story and the plot. The only thing I don't really like is the name calling thing like "Stop being a douche!" and "Okay, you bitch!" because it sounds kind of immature haha. I'm not opposed to swearing in the slightest, it just sounds like a twelve year old is saying it in my mind. Try to keep that in your head when you're writing. Other than that, I really like it a lot. Very interesting :)
I think it's Jason becuz he looks like the type of guy who doesn't like being rejected so in return he is goin to hurt u back for hurting him when he just doesn't understand tht he wasn't Leah's type so yeah but thts who I think it is can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)