Two Hearts Beating as One - Comments

Awwwww, Jacky is adorable!! (And I'm a Ronnie girl!) I still need to read the dates!! I wanna see what the guys are like in a somewhat romantic situation!

Jen xx

Eeeep. I subscribed and recommended. This story is adorable as heeeeeeeeeeeeeeck. I love it! :)

I'm still loving this! Can't wait to see what happens on each of the dates!!!! :)

Jen xx

Why has no one else commented on this yet?? I'm really enjoying this! With every chapter you reveal a little bit more about the characters and they keep developing in complex ways making them seem like real people.

I really like this and can't wait for more!
Jen xx

Yay update :)

Said the slightly, but still attractive guy said You've repeated 'said' and missed a word out here!

Other than that, great update. I laughed when she produced their wallets! That's a cool little character enhancer.

Hope the next one is slightly longer as I'm enjoying this story :)

Jen xx

FIRST COMMENT :)

I really like this, I'm interested to find out what 'baggage' they have and how it could effect their relationships with the guys. The girls seem really tight and I can tell they would never let anything hurt the other.

Hope you update soon :)

Jen xx